tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7052892652885729518.post4804921088614834477..comments2016-08-20T17:17:33.126-04:00Comments on There's No Crying in the War Room: Chapter SixNathanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00648438549121320566noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7052892652885729518.post-4469088939020420042008-01-04T07:33:00.000-05:002008-01-04T07:33:00.000-05:00Thanks Jeri. I'll go back and look at the verb te...Thanks Jeri. I'll go back and look at the verb tense thing. If you look at it, you'll see that the odd numbered chapters are told in the first person and the even numbered ones are in the third person. So, verb tense should go somewhat wacky when Paul is telling his story, but in this chapter it should be standard. I'll try to fix it.Nathanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00648438549121320566noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7052892652885729518.post-9583966898807967082008-01-04T02:04:00.000-05:002008-01-04T02:04:00.000-05:00Nathan, this continues to be good - especially whe...Nathan, this continues to be good - especially where you do dialogue and action.<BR/><BR/>You seem to have some verb tense problems early in this chapter - unless it's on purpose??? If so, I didn't quite catch the reason. You shift from past tense to present, and back again.<BR/><BR/>Keep writing, and we'll keep reading!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com